Star writer: Emily wrote a fantastic description of Max from the book The Hodgeheg. She used 2A sentences, conjunctions and used some interesting vocabulary. Excellent work!
WOW: Ethan has shown a brilliant attitude towards learning by putting his hand up lots to answer questions and he always tries hard
Star Writer – Maisy – for writing a description of Max from the book The Hodgeheg She used some interesting vocabulary and detail of the character. Excellent work!
WOW – Emilio – for showing an improved attitude and working hard to listen to instructions the first time.
Pema wrote a splendid description of Max the Hodgehog! She included a great range of descriptive devices and thoughtful vocabulary to add immense detail for the reader. Well done Pema!
WOW: Charlie has come into school all week with a really good attitude towards learning. He has shown good attention and has made good decisions to try and improve the quality of his work.
Star Writer: Andrea – for a great description of Varjak Paw using contrasting conjunctions and relative clauses.
WOW: Barney – for sensible behaviour and full effort in all tasks. Well done Barney
Star Writer – Kai – great editing and redrafting in his descriptive writing.
WOW – Rhys – listening well and taking on advice when given.
WoW – Charlie – For always finishing tasks quickly and quietly and for being so helpful around the classroom. Well done and thank you for being helpful!
Star writer – Ellie – For a super description of Varjak Paw. Ellie worked hard to think of brilliant adjectives, pronouns (as sentence starters) and contrasting conjunctions. Well done.
Star Writer – Tegan – for producing a high quality description of the Midnight Fox.
WOW – Ruby – for continuing to push herself in all aspects of school life.
Star Writer: Evie for writing a wonderful description of the Midnight Fox where she was able to use effective figurative language.
WOW: Arishnan for being enthusiastic and working hard in all lessons. Arishnan takes pride in his work and presentation.
Star Writer – Jack for writing a fantastic description of the Midnight Fox using a range of figurative language. Keep up the great work!
WOW – Amber is an enthusiastic, positive and hardworking member of 5R. She is a great role model to others and gives all work 100% effort. Keep up the positivity!
Star writer – Lila-Rose produced an excellent draft version of a wartime diary entry, using some ambitious adjectives to describe how Tom Oakley felt about taking in an evacuee, William Beech, for the first time.
WOW – Thomas created a poster about the dangers of electricity, which was very convincing about why it is so important to keep clear of electricity. His use of vocabulary to put across his points was also accurate and relevant to the task.
Star Writer – Lucksha and Connie – for writing a descriptive diary entry as a character from a book and using ambitious punctuation too.
WOW – Poppy – for showing a great attitude and working hard on all tasks all of the time.
Star writer: Grace For producing a good quality diary entry using a range of sentence structures and interesting language, which was engaging to read.
WOW: Steven For showing an excellent understanding of both long multiplication and division methods, which he applied effectively when solving word problems.